This space has been dead for a while now… but I am still very much alive, thankyouverymuch. I had a mini operation just a little while back and I did think that I was really gonna die, but I shall leave that ordeal for another post instead.
So, K forwarded this romantic passage excerpt from Lullabies by Lang Leav to our group chat:
And I could not help but tweak it (sorry, Lang Leav)…
…and the passage now essentially became the backbone of erotica novels like 50 Shades series by E.L. James and the Crossfire series by Sylvia Day.
Speaking of which, the official movie trailer of 50 Shades of Grey is out.
A couple of my girlfriends declared that it shall be a girls’ movie date when it is released next February… And I was, like:
I certainly hope the scriptwriter for the movie did not lift any dialogue from the book and possess a wider range of vocabulary than E.L. James.
Please, do away with the countless “oh my“s, and any reference to Ana’s “subconsciousness” or her “inner goddess“. And please… address genitals for what they are instead of referring them as “down there“. I had wanted to punch the book “Ip Man-style” countless times because of Ana’s maturity, train of thoughts and behaviour, which is so much like a 10-year-old girl’s who has voices in her head (and that might still be giving her too much credit).
I found myself wondering several times if the editor of 50 Shades was furiously masturbating him/herself while reading the scripts, and that his/her eyes glazed over the obvious grammar and spelling mistakes in his/her excitement (e.g.: “longue” for “lounge“, using the word “literally” in non-literal descriptions, not checking up on the meaning of “subconscious”, etc). And there are so so so many tacky descriptions that E.L. James could do without; like this one:
This is just too much to absorb. I’m like an overflowing tank of gasoline – full, beyond capacity. There is no room for any more.
– 50 Shades Darker, Chapter 14 (by E.L. James)
She could do without it if that was the best analogy she could come up with, really.
Why did I even finish the series when I could have walked away from it, if I hated it so much? It is because I am the sort who would smell an old dirty rag cloth despite knowing it would stink so so bad. A weird bone in me wants to know how bad the smell exactly is… and then gag and laugh at the same time while beating myself up after proving myself right. The same goes for 50 Shades, I guess.
The Crossfire series so far is better written than the 50 Shades series of course, in spite of the overkill of details. If the author did away with Eva and Gideon’s OOTD descriptions, the book’s number of pages would be halved (ok, I exaggerate but it was close). I get it, one’s a blonde boobsy socialite and the other is a Greek-God-like, well-hung billionaire. Their wardrobes are phenomenal. But there isn’t a need for a OOTD description for every new day and social events that the characters attended in the story!
I was starting to skip pages of sex (which was rather repetitive and boring) so that I could just get to the end, and I was dismayed to find out that there are 2 more installments, which are not yet released at this point in time. DANG IT! The story’s draggy, over-the-top dramatic and there are a few characters in the book that I wish I could slap with a rotting trout. But I need a closure, man. Turned out that the 4th installment was long overdue… by almost a year. WTH.
Now what? What should I move on to?